Well, I never actually embarrassed myself over the lyric...but I really LIKE my version and I want to get it out there, for others to enjoy. It kind of lends a Bowie-esque / Metropolis (the movie) feel to the lyrics. You know, just imagine it as a science fiction tune, set a few years forward, in some dystopian future, when the latest breast implants (or who knows, penile..?) have gone all neon and LED-enhanced. And you can read about it in a magazine...(Oh, oh) Bennie and the Jets! (so now I've gone and embarrassed myself -- I hope you're happy! :-)