The Story: Don't eat the fruit in the garden, Eden,, It wasn't in God's natural plan., You were only a rib,, And look at what you did,, To Adam, the father of Man.
The Story: You smell like goat, I'll see you in hell
I thought this line sounded really interesting and poetic, like she wanted to be redeemed rather than "sold to the night". I looked the lyrics up online to be sure and was highly disappointed to find that the line totally didn't exist.
When I told my husband my version later he seemed to think it was hilarious, so it's probably a good thing I'm not a poet.
Submitted by
Anonymous
Submitted on
4/17/2002 2:21 am
Age it happened
29
Better than original?
Yes
Convinced others you were right?
No
Was partying involved?
No
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